Concord, particles

SAMPLE 1: “Their demand is laughable. It is most irresponsible in the sense that the 774 local councils in the country was a creation of the constitution, all the villages and towns that constitute that local government is in the constitution.”(Count us out of the Emirate, The Nation, Sunday July 2, 2017)

I draw readers’ attention to singular verb-form (was) which occurs in the following context: “the 774 local councils was a creation of the constitution.” What noun/noun phrase is that singular verb (was) supposed to be in concord with? In other words, we expect a noun phrase somewhere in the structure having a singular status that is logically related to the verb slot occupied by the verb was. The only relevant noun phrase in this regard is “the 774 local councils”, a phrase that is unmistakably plural. The presence of this noun phrase makes the reporter’s choice of a singular verb-form such a curious one. It is possible the reporter has been misled by the indefinite article (a) following the verb-slot directly. That post-verb-slot article bears no relevance to concord matters. At any rate, the verb should be changed to its plural form: were.

There is yet another problem of concord in the same excerpt. Let’s note the singular verb-form (is) which occurs in the following context: “the villages and towns that constitute that local government is in the constitution.” The verb (is), as we have noted, is unmistakably singular. What then is the noun/noun phrase that influences the writer’s choice of the singular verb-form? There is a singular noun phrase, “that local government”, immediately to the left of the verb-slot, which in all probability influences the choice of a singular verb-form. However, there is nothing in the grammar and logic of the structure that suggests that that noun phrase is of any relevance to the form of the verb. Actually, the relevant noun phrase as far as concord is concerned is “the villages and towns”, a phrase that is indisputably plural, which plurality contradicts the choice of the singular verb-form (is). It becomes logical to convert the verb to its plural form: are.

Sample 2: “A second term in office would enable the President to consolidate on all the good works he has started.”(Enugu APC Backs Buhari for Second Term, Wants Onyeama Sacked, TheSunday Punch, September 24, 2017)

Next, we are interested in the relationship between the particle on and the verb consolidate in the following context: “would enable the President to consolidate onall the good works he has started.” The problem here is that, like many Nigerians, the writer has brought in a particle (on) where no particle is required.  The verb consolidate does not take any particle at all. It would appear that the writer has confused the usage of the verb build with that of consolidate. Yes, the verb build takes the particle on; but consolidate does not.

Now read the following sentences: 1) Having spent the last four years building infrastructure, the Governor has promised to spend the second term consolidating his efforts. 2) Now in control of most of the seats in the national assembly, the party plans to consolidate its lead by gaining most of the governorship seats in the country. 3) What I need now is a fairly substantial loan to consolidate my business. 4) The team scored two goals in the first half of the match and consolidated by scoring another goal within the first five minutes of the second half. 5) The newspaper spent the first five years of its existence expanding its circulation; now it is consolidating its spread. 6) It is no longer our priority to increase the number of our customers; our concern now is to consolidate—to retain and continue to gain the confidence of those customers.7) Having presented his major arguments in favour of his client, the counsel went ahead to consolidate his arguments at the next sitting. 8) The APC should now concern itself with consolidating its hold on power by providing welfare for Nigerians. 9) We are consolidating our leadership position in the oil business by building fuel stations across the length and breadth of this country. 10) The Armed Forces have consolidated their hold on the captured areas by building garrisons in strategic locations.

Now read the following sentences: 1) The Governor will spend the second term building on the efforts of his first term. 2) The mobilizing agency is now building on its initial enlightenment campaign. 3) Secondary education is planned in such a way that it builds on primary education. 4) Every good teacher should know how to lay a foundation and build on it later. 5) I am not sure the lady has agreed to my proposal; but I will try and build on my earlier discussion with her. 6) In the last class, we saw how tense functions in sentences; today, we will build on that by constructing sentences illustrating tense patterns. 7) Have we built anything substantial on the foundation laid by the heroes of our independence? 8) Our spiritual lives must be built on the principles of the scriptures. 8) A nation should not be built on falsehood. 9) Do not build your hope and confidence on the promises made by man. 10) You cannot build something on nothing.

Similarly,some Nigerians have this habit of allowing the particle on to collocate with the verb emphasize. They would say, “The chairman emphasized *on the need for probity in the handling of the company’s affairs.” The proper thing to say is: “The chairman emphasized the need for probity in the handling of the company’s affairs.” Other defective sentences and their corrected versions are as follows: Defective: The professor emphasized *on the importance of regular reading as a means of developing one’s capacity. Corrected version: The professor emphasized the importance of regular reading as a means of developing one’s capacity. Defective: The doctor emphasized *on the need for exercise as a way of maintaining a healthy body. Corrected version: The doctor emphasized the need for regular exercise as a way of maintaining a healthy body. Defective: The guest lecturer encouraged the developing African nations to emphasize *on mechanized agriculture as a means of guaranteeing food security. Corrected version: The guest lecturer encouraged the developing African nations to emphasizemechanized agriculture as a means of guaranteeing food security. Defective: This regime is emphasizing *on training and re-training of staff. Corrected version: This regime is emphasizing training and re-training of staff. Defective: The instructor emphasized *on the need to maintain a clean and hygienic environment. Corrected version: The instructor emphasized the need to maintain a clean and hygienic environment.

Readers should note that although the verb emphasize does not take the particle on, the noun emphasis does. Please read the following sentences: 1) The new regime places emphasis on probity and accountability. (Compare: The new regime emphasizes probity and accountability.) 2) The emphasis in the western world is on increased technology. (Compare: The western world emphasizes increased technology.) 3) The emphasis here is on herbal medicine (Compare: Here we emphasize herbal medicine.) 4) The workshop will place emphasis on the participants’ ability to pronounce words correctly. (Compare: The workshop will emphasize the participants’ ability to pronounce words correctly.) 5) This government is placing emphasis on security. (Compare: This government is emphasizing security.) 6) Any training in English should lay emphasis on clarity of expression. (Compare: Any training in English should emphasize clarity of expression.)

Similarly, some users confuse the particle/preposition that should go with the verb prepare (or its noun preparation) with the one that goes with the adjective preparatory. They would say, preparatory for instead of preparatory to. Read the following sentences: 1a) We are preparing for exams. b) We have bought materials in preparation for exams. C) Materials have been bought preparatory to exams. 2a) We are preparingfor the construction work. b) We have cleared the site in preparation for the construction work. C) We have cleared the site preparatory to the commencement of construction work. 3a) INEC is preparing for elections. b) INEC has been procuring materials in preparation for elections. C) INEC has been procuring materials preparatory to the elections. 4a) We are preparingfor the meeting. b)The hall has been tidied up in preparation for the meeting. c) The hall has been tidied up preparatory to the meeting. 5) a) I am preparing for resumption. b) I have bought new books in preparation for resumption. c) I have bought new books preparatory to resumption. 6) a) The Super Eagles are preparing for the match.  b) The Super Eagles have gone to the camp in preparation for the match. c) The Super Eagles have gone to the camp preparatory to the match.

Note the following: prepare for; preparation for; preparatory to.